I also like video reviews and try to check them out on any gear I’m thinking about buying. I think yours is very good. I don’t mind the informal approach and in fact find it refreshing, especially compared to video reviews that are basically commercials produced by the manufacturer.
I’m nitpicking, but since you asked, I’ll offer a few other random thoughts:
1. I really like the zooming you did on the cuff zipper and the zipper pulls. But some of the other camera work was a bit too dynamic and might benefit from a steadier vantage point.
2. I usually like seeing the inside of the jackets and any attachment to pants.
3. It might be too personal for your model, but I like getting an idea of how the jacket fits folks of a certain size, so I find it helpful when the model says something like, “I’m 6 foot and 170 lbs, and I’m trying on a large.” The height and weight may not be ones I share, but it can sometimes give me an idea of how the sizing runs.
But overall — I like this a lot and don’t think it would benefit by more equipment (except perhaps showing how it fits with the rider on a bike — which I assume you already have).